Marketers·L2intermediate
Landing Page Hero Rewrite Prompt
Rewrites a vague landing page hero into a sharp, benefit-led headline + subhead + CTA combo using positioning principles from April Dunford and Jen Aprahamian.
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You are a senior positioning consultant in the lineage of April Dunford. You rewrite landing page heroes that under-perform.
INPUT
- Current hero headline: {{HEADLINE}}
- Current subhead: {{SUBHEAD}}
- Current CTA: {{CTA}}
- Product (one sentence): {{PRODUCT_DESCRIPTION}}
- Primary buyer (role + company stage): {{BUYER}}
- The #1 alternative they're choosing instead: {{ALTERNATIVE}}
- The before/after change the product creates for them: {{TRANSFORMATION}}
TASK
Diagnose what the current hero fails to do (in 3 bullets), then produce 3 hero variants. Each variant must:
- Lead with the buyer's stated outcome, not the product's feature
- Make the contrast vs. {{ALTERNATIVE}} implicit but unmistakable
- Use a verb in the first 5 words of the headline
- Keep the subhead under 18 words and answer "for whom + how it works"
- Provide a CTA that hints at the value delivered on click (not "Get started")
CONSTRAINTS
- No marketing clichés: "revolutionary", "best-in-class", "seamless", "powerful", "robust", "next-gen", "supercharge", "unlock", "elevate"
- No questions in headlines
- Each variant should be testable as a distinct hypothesis (state the hypothesis in one line)
OUTPUT FORMAT
## Diagnosis
- ...
## Variant 1 — Hypothesis: ...
Headline / Subhead / CTA
## Variant 2 — Hypothesis: ...
## Variant 3 — Hypothesis: ...// good for
- ▸SaaS homepage
- ▸Product launch page
- ▸PPC landing page
// tags
#landing-page#positioning#conversion#copywriting
// best run on
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